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Hi Jackson I just want to say great work on your Ocean it is very good but ithink you could have added a bit more writing in it and say why you enjoyd it and what you found tricky.
I love your Our Ocean slide, Besides being in the bush I love the Ocean and think it is very important we look after it. In summer we spend a lot of time at the beach, swimming, diving, and relaxing on the sand. It is very important that we leave it how we found it or better.
On Monday we went for a walk to the beach and we picked up a lot of rubbish out of it! The rockpools had all sorts of things like old gloves, a pair of secateurs, metal, a curtain, and other rubbish.
We also collected some shells and ground down glass, plus a bonus of 6 sinkers that had gotten stuck in the sand. I think that was a little present from Tangaroa/ocean God to say thank you for cleaning me, We can use these for when we go fishing.
Nice to see you’re online learning through lockdown.
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Hi Jackson I just want to say great work on your Ocean it is very good but ithink you could have added a bit more writing in it and say why you enjoyd it and what you found tricky.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jackson,
ReplyDeleteI love your Our Ocean slide, Besides being in the bush I love the Ocean and think it is very important we look after it. In summer we spend a lot of time at the beach, swimming, diving, and relaxing on the sand. It is very important that we leave it how we found it or better.
On Monday we went for a walk to the beach and we picked up a lot of rubbish out of it! The rockpools had all sorts of things like old gloves, a pair of secateurs, metal, a curtain, and other rubbish.
We also collected some shells and ground down glass, plus a bonus of 6 sinkers that had gotten stuck in the sand. I think that was a little present from Tangaroa/ocean God to say thank you for cleaning me, We can use these for when we go fishing.
Nice to see you’re online learning through lockdown.
Mā te wā
Miss Mikayla